Step 1: Format: Same formal letter format — addresses, date, subject, salutation, closing.
Step 2: Body — different angle: This version frames the complaint around a specific disease outbreak (cholera/typhoid from contaminated water supply) rather than mosquito-borne illness, and requests water-testing and a temporary tanker supply as the remedy.
Step 3: Closing: Formal closing with request for urgent editorial attention.
Final Answer: 45, Model Town
Kanpur
15 March 2026
The Editor
Dainik Jagran
Kanpur
Subject: Outbreak of water-borne diseases in our area
Sir,
I wish to bring to your notice, through your widely-read newspaper, the outbreak of water-borne diseases such as typhoid and cholera in our locality over the last two weeks. Several residents suspect that the municipal water supply has been contaminated due to a leaking sewage line running close to the main pipeline. Two nearby clinics report a sharp rise in patients complaining of fever, vomiting and diarrhoea.
I request the Jal Nigam to test the water supply immediately, repair the damaged pipeline, and arrange an alternative tanker supply of clean drinking water until the issue is resolved.
I trust your paper will highlight this pressing public-health concern and prompt swift corrective action from the authorities.
Yours faithfully,
Priya Sharma